Fiction Writing

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Fiction Writing - Let's try to write it

Grammar in eBooks Down The Tubes?

Without traditional publishers assigning editors to new authors, who’s watching the grammar store?

Whenever I’m ready to do a detailed edit on a manuscript I run the word search for was and that and had especially had been.  Usually, I find far too many of them.  Their elimination forces a writer to restructure the sentence and actually ends being better.  You can’t eliminate them all but I’d say you can kill 90% of that, 3/4 of was and most hads

I recently found a wonderful site which demonstrates the problem.  At AutoWizard Editing Critic you can paste in your best 500 words and it will automatically find all kinds of stuff you’ve missed.  Try it.

Editors at traditional publishing houses have kept the grammar consistent.  We know eBook providers have no editors.  When eBook sales surpass hard copy books the grammar is going to be all over the map.  People I’ve met through my Writers Group say their friend edits their work.  “You are such a fab writer!”  “I can’t see anything wrong with this.”  “I love you.”  Bad idea. So is self-editing.  Style guides for writers abound and you’d think people getting into eBooks would have one or two at hand.  Strunk and White-The Elements of Style, and the Chicago Manual Of Style are two of the better known ones.

Writing, that is the creative process, is easy for me.  The editing is where the work is and I’ve spent countless hours on my stories.  Everyone wants to be a writer, but few will put in the required work.  The devil is in the details and the details are editing.

Editing in eBooks

Chances of having anything rejected when submitting eBooks is slim as there are no gatekeepers.  I’ve noticed the popular ebooks are the best edited.  Usually it’s easy to tell from the synopsis beside the book cover what the rest of the story will look like.

It’s difficult to find an editor who will catch everything from commas and quotation marks to chronology, structure, etc. without ruining the style or  author’s voice.  Friends and relatives are poor choices for editors as many new writers can’t take criticism well.  A writers group isn’t worried too much about hurting your feelings so this is the best way to go.  My group has become competent editors, with each one finding different strengths of the process.  By the time the piece makes the critique of everyone in the group, the vast majority of bugs are gone.

Some writer’s groups for your information:

http://www.forwriters.com/groups.html

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